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How do I tell you that you’re beautiful? How can I be different? How can I express my attraction? When columns upon Columns Of testosterone filled wolves Dressed in rented Italian suits And discolored, mesh sneakers Speak similar flirtatious dialect Will this baby scented Sunflower do the trick? I picked it from my walled Garden of Eden. I spent 4 years mending these butterfly coated petals, Solely for this moment How can I express my need for your smile? When tattered paper donations have been sent To elicit short-term, newlywed goose bumps upon your flesh ... May I have this dance? You’ve never heard this sensual ballad. But, it’s an element of my Spoken Word Waiting for your translation I await your palms, Because this is not a Man’s world This can be ours. But, will you leap off from trampoline’s corazon? My syllables are in your hands. My book is within your misunderstood palm paths. But, If you’re going to read between my lines, Do not be illiterate to my heartbeats. Your move… ©Drake J. Eszes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/10/2013 9:05:00 AM
Oh a romantic you are
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:25:00 AM
On occasion, yes. =D Thank you, Denise!
Date: 9/16/2013 12:32:00 AM
Drake...check your soup mail when you've got a chance...I'm faving this...It's just...beyond beyond sweet..and BELIEVE ME...Sweet gets me going!
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Date: 9/16/2013 6:22:00 AM
Thank you again for that, Eileen. :) Ok, will do!
Date: 8/30/2013 3:37:00 PM
I remember liking this....I wasn't wrong! Beautiful...Had to read another one tonight! :) Take care
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Date: 8/30/2013 5:12:00 PM
=D That means a lot, Eileen. Thank you. :)
Date: 7/22/2013 8:40:00 AM
Bro! This a beautifully written, "Check Mate" before the game has begun, piece have ever read! Absolutely Beautiful!
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Date: 7/22/2013 9:32:00 AM
Hey there, Siza. Great to meet you! Thanks so much for that. =D
Date: 7/11/2013 9:36:00 PM
She would be crazy not to leap! I LOVE this!!
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Date: 7/12/2013 12:12:00 AM
Indeed!!! :) Hi & thank you so much, Toshia!!!
Date: 7/4/2013 8:27:00 AM
Quite a Masterpiece of a poem, Drake. I enjoyed the passion, and depth you went into. Go on my page, and check out my poems. Might find one you like. Peace.
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Date: 7/4/2013 8:27:00 AM
Hi Jiril! I'm sure I will. :) Thanks for coming by here!!
Date: 7/2/2013 9:53:00 AM
Indeed.. it is often very subtle to read between your lines-- as always beautifully penned.. And as a reply to your last comment on my poem-- you are right up there at the top of the OCP list :)-- couldn't mention all the names, but you know you are !!
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Date: 7/2/2013 10:00:00 AM
HAAA! You're so adorable. Thank you for that, Kim. :)
Date: 7/1/2013 2:59:00 PM
This is a wow Drake I love it one for favs Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/1/2013 3:01:00 PM
WOO HOO! Thank you, Shadow!!! :)
Date: 7/1/2013 12:05:00 PM
An exquisite piece! I love the title and the line " Do not be illiterate to my heartbeats". Left with me, this pen is deep. Well done. AO
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Date: 7/1/2013 12:11:00 PM
Awesome to hear! :) Thanks for stopping this way!
Date: 6/30/2013 9:20:00 PM
"But, it’s an element of my Spoken Word - Waiting for your translation" .. Impressive..! I like the way you describe equality in the romance in this poem, Drake. Thank you for sharing.. :)
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Date: 7/1/2013 1:33:00 AM
Hi, Shirley!!! :) Yes, balance was key here. Thank you for stopping by here! :)
Date: 6/29/2013 6:47:00 AM
What a beautifully written romantic poem.. it gave me goose-bumps. Thanks for sharing this.
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Date: 6/29/2013 9:45:00 AM
How awesome! I'm all for the goosebumps! :) Thank you for stopping by, as always, Kim! :)
Date: 6/28/2013 9:01:00 PM
incredible~ Drake, and lol, don't skip out on the beat... I do love the illiterate line... hope she pawns the next more according to the mooned life you have to offer... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/28/2013 10:38:00 PM
Hey, PD. Ha, very well said. I'm glad you came by here. Many thanks!
Date: 6/28/2013 6:58:00 PM
I really like this one because I can understand it. Sometimes the way some people write free verse, it is hard for me to get , but this one is really cool
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Date: 6/28/2013 10:36:00 PM
I agree. It can be challenging, at times. But, thank you so much Andrea! :) Really nice to see you stop by!
Date: 6/28/2013 6:04:00 PM
Holy wow... Dazzling and dramatic announcements of infinite love ...I want another bowl full :)
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Date: 6/28/2013 10:36:00 PM
I'll have another serving soon enough. :) Thank you, Karen! It's nice to see you stop by here!
Date: 6/28/2013 5:48:00 PM
One lucky woman Drake..awesome write..
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Date: 6/28/2013 10:35:00 PM
Only in the figurative sense, yes. :) Just another fun poem. Thank you so much, Donna.
Date: 6/28/2013 2:01:00 PM
Drake...lines that breakthrough old scar-tissue in my brain are welcome.....leaps well done....jimbo
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Date: 6/28/2013 2:04:00 PM
Awesome! Damn awesome, Jimbo! Thanks so much! May we continue to leap! ;)
Date: 6/28/2013 10:38:00 AM
amazing imagery u used here, giving more colors to the piece.
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Date: 6/28/2013 12:35:00 PM
Hi, Elai!!! :) Thank you so much! I'm all for the colors.
Date: 6/28/2013 1:35:00 AM
"Do not be illiterate to my heartbeats" this sums up the whole poem. It is such a spectacular poem with strong expression. Drake, I'll make sure to stop by every of your poems.
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Date: 6/28/2013 5:50:00 AM
That's very cool of you to do, Hassan. I appreciate that very much. :)
Date: 6/27/2013 8:26:00 PM
Be still my heart!!! Drake is so romantic and passionate, if more men took initiative such as you wrote, how could a woman resist. You have charmed me! Hugs
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Date: 6/27/2013 8:33:00 PM
:) You're very sweet, Cecilia. I do fully agree with you. But, I would love to see a lady take the initiative too. I doubt a man would resist for 1/8 of a second. :) I'm very happy to have charmed! Thank you so much!
Date: 6/27/2013 4:07:00 PM
such a love is not for the jealous man. think twice.
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:31:00 PM
Nope it's not. :) Thanks, John!
Date: 6/27/2013 12:10:00 PM
Just stopping to say hello and hope to read something new, drake.*hint*..lol, huggs..:)
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Date: 6/27/2013 1:57:00 PM
HA! Hi again! :) Soon!
Date: 6/27/2013 9:42:00 AM
I love this poem, Drake....it's beauty, is honest, sincere & kind....really enjoyed:0) Ty for sharing didn't want it to end. Excellent....
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Date: 6/27/2013 1:57:00 PM
Hi Cherie!!! That's really awesome of you to say. Thank you so very much! :)
Date: 6/27/2013 8:02:00 AM
My fave line has to be "My syllables are in your hands" absolutely love the whole piece Drake :) awesome to sink my teeth into especially this time of the afternoon.. Just love the title as well :) tc Wilma
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Date: 6/28/2013 1:48:00 PM
Hi Wilma!!!! :) I hope your teeth are ok! Thank you so much!
Date: 6/27/2013 7:36:00 AM
YES, this is poetry at its best! Holy heart-wrenching, Batman! I actually felt butterflies while reading this - that's how easy it was for me to connect with this poem. I think we can all relate to that moment when we've put our hearts on the line and we're waiting on pins and needles while the ball is in the other person's court. And the title is perfect - gotta love a man with initiative! ;)
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:40:00 AM
Heather, HI! :) Kudos on the Batman statement! LOL Yes, so well said. ;) Thank you so much!!!
Date: 6/27/2013 6:35:00 AM
You go Drake! This is a spectacular romantic gesture, I hope she melts into your waiting arms.
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:37:00 AM
Sometimes (I really mean all the time) you have to be bold. :) This was just a writing I had fun with. Thanks so much, Richard!
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