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Inheritance

plagues, war, natural disasters children inherit *August 14, 2020 For Line's "Ziket" contest

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Date: 8/19/2020 3:02:00 AM
Powerful, realistic zilet salute alkas
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Date: 8/18/2020 3:43:00 PM
Way to go on the win, Carolyn. It's cool to see the winner list, and thanks too for my win in YOUR contest. That was sure a clever contest idea.
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Date: 8/18/2020 2:42:00 PM
Congrats on your great Ziket! So true!!
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Date: 8/18/2020 1:29:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/18/2020 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. So true and so sad. Great picture to go with a great write. Enjoy your win and day................
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Date: 8/18/2020 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Carolyn :)
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Date: 8/18/2020 10:21:00 AM
such truth! congrats on a win
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Date: 8/18/2020 8:57:00 AM
Wonderful ziket, Carolyn:-) Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/18/2020 8:20:00 AM
Back with congrats, Krish, on your win in Line's contest! Hope and Health, Gershon
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Date: 8/18/2020 7:19:00 AM
Back with congratulations for your win. So well done. A poem that resonates. xomo
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Date: 8/15/2020 9:56:00 PM
Such a meaningful message, so succinctly penned. It sure hurts to ponder the implications. Let's hope for better! Thanks, Carolyn! ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/15/2020 5:55:00 PM
so sadly true
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Date: 8/15/2020 1:21:00 PM
Yes s very sad reality of life .
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Date: 8/14/2020 3:58:00 PM
sad on so many levels Carolyn:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/14/2020 1:49:00 PM
So sad and so true. xomo
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Date: 8/14/2020 1:43:00 PM
Well said my friend--the legacy for our children carries a high burden. All the best, Carolyn.
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Date: 8/14/2020 11:23:00 AM
- Unfortunately you are right, Carolyn - Excellent written - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/14/2020 11:36:00 AM
Thanks, Sunshine, I will! Hope your weekend is good too!
Date: 8/14/2020 11:17:00 AM
Plus the National Debt! Well said! Aloha! Rico
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/14/2020 11:21:00 AM
Indeed, I would have included financial ruin if more syllables had been allowed. Thanks for reading, Rico!

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