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Inhaling the Sea

I ntoxicating scents waft N ipping crabs scuttle as H appily the waves lap A gainst the sea shore L uring the unwary I nto its depths N ever ceasing its motion G liding ever onwards T antilizing and teasing H uge swells as tide rises E nergetic dolphins play S hooting through the water E asily flipping, jumping high A ngrily chasing off the sharks written 07/04/2014 contest 1 in 4: Choose your Acrostic Title I went with Inhaling The Sea

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Date: 7/29/2014 6:38:00 PM
Shadow, , a true deep scenario .... Congratulations, on your wonderful win. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:51:00 PM
I love the image of the dolphins chasing off the sharks. cool acrostic, grats on your win ;)
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Date: 7/18/2014 2:30:00 PM
A sweet win...PD
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations, Shadow. I love the sea and its vast population of delightful living creatures. Beautifully written.
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:43:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again, congratulations Shadow.
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Date: 7/18/2014 6:46:00 AM
Congrats on a great win dear Shadow! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/18/2014 12:52:00 AM
Very lovely Shadow,, loved the acrostic so well penned,, congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/17/2014 11:32:00 PM
Oh, I'm so glad to see this is yours. I sure enjoyed the way you mentioned all these little creatures scurrying in the sand and sea. I love the ocean so you chose well to do this title. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 7/7/2014 5:50:00 PM
So clever what a great talent you are. Very well done. much enjoyed you make it look easy. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 7/6/2014 8:50:00 AM
Did you mean Huge instead of Hugh? I enjoyed this trip to the sea Shadow.
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