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Inhaling the Sea

Dreaming 'pon the snow white beach in peace Inhaling the sea, in reverie Recalling our flame brings caprice Dreaming 'pon the snow white beach in peace Once again love will find release Ignite our flame all parts sensory Dreaming 'pon the snow white beach in peace Inhaling the sea, in deep reverie Inspired by Andrea Dietrich's contest Written December 2013

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Skat A

Date: 2/11/2014 7:55:00 PM

nice win Sara,.... luv~ SKAT

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2014 6:43:00 PM

Lovely Joyce Andie likes them short WE like them longer LOL I would have put yours much higher! Congrad's on your win my Yassie Light & Love

Donna Jones

Date: 1/12/2014 5:13:00 PM

Really love dream upon the snow white beach line Sara....I lived in Gulfport ms when I was a child where there were white sand beaches...congratulations on your win....hope all is well....

Joseph May

Date: 1/12/2014 4:52:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Sara

Roger Horsch

Date: 1/12/2014 11:40:00 AM

Congrats on the wonderful poem Sara, Nicely written.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/12/2014 11:09:00 AM

Very pretty Sara, congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2014 9:48:00 PM

Thanks for supporting my contest, Sara. Congrats on the winners' list. Most of your lines in this poem were really great.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 5:25:00 AM

wow... Now this is a poem., Sara.. My favorite thing when I go near the ocean shore... Love inhales the sea... Wonderful imagery.. Enjoyed... LINDA

Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/24/2013 2:28:00 AM

Very nice Sara, I hope you have a very Merry Christmas with your family oxox's

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/23/2013 11:14:00 AM

That is so awesome that Cody has come home for Christmas, that is grand my friend! This write is tremendous Sara, I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! I want to wish you and yours a Merry Christmas! Great Work!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/23/2013 8:18:00 AM

Im glad for you! Nice poem, I thought I might give the Sea one a try..we often think alike. lol. BG