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Inhale Exhale

Inhale; Exhale Angry, teary, eyes- Inhale; Exhale Sore, and dried up lips- Inhale; Exhale I've let go of all these ties- Inhale; Exhale That tie my heart (together) - . . . *rips* Inhale; Exhale Sweaty, lonely, hands- Inhale; Exhale I (reached) but now you're (gone)- Inhale; Exhale I thought you'd understand- Inhale; Exhale It's time that I move on.

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Date: 2/18/2011 8:55:00 PM
Effective repetition. Did u just explain how to overcome an anxiety attack? Clever.
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Date: 2/7/2011 2:54:00 PM
Dana'Lynn, you have expressed the point of romanic let down very well. Good original method you used as well. And thanks for visiting my poems too.
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Date: 2/7/2011 10:45:00 AM
So very touching, Dana'lynn and you expressed your thoughts in such a creative form. I love the way you repeat "Inhald; Exhale." Sometimes we reach a point where we know we have to move on. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/7/2011 9:29:00 AM
Good one that expresses much emotion..I can feel the release of a love gone wrong..Enjoyed reading your work this morn..Your presence at my work was uplifting.Sara
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Date: 2/7/2011 9:28:00 AM
Nice inspiring expressions on what to inhale and what to exhale, nice rhyming
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