Ingrid

That sly smile, Gives way to a grin. I kiss your lips, And wait to begin. Holding hands, Bodies entwined. Hearts beating, In sync of time.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/21/2010 9:17:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry today Chris. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol

Daniel Corcoran

Date: 1/20/2010 7:42:00 PM

very good poem. its always good for any poet to either a/be attracted to someone b/to go out with them or c/to break up asit gives stronger feelings and more subjects to write about. i myself have none of these options so am more limited in what i can write. but great job on your part summing up love.