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Infinitesimal Beauty

The veil is rising Easing off my fear strained face, it catches on crystalized tears, pulling away I bath in liberty The first airless void stills all movement, abandon was never nameless, faceless No longer condemned sliding towards the light, I take in my first breath free of regret and torment In the ensuing minutes infinitesimal beauty takes my breath again as I exhale my first sigh...

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Leon Enriquez

Date: 3/12/2014 12:12:00 AM

Dear Jayne: A profound layer of feelings. A lovely read. Leon

Jayne Eggins
Date: 5/20/2014 9:22:00 AM

Thank you Leon I am so happy you liked it thanks for the visit and the comment its very much appreciated sorry for the delay in answering your comment...love Jayne x

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 3/4/2014 6:05:00 AM

You write very well Jayne. Congrats to another excelling write from your pen.

Jayne Eggins
Date: 3/8/2014 9:14:00 AM

Thank you Mustapha I am very happy you liked it love Jayne x

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/2/2014 4:08:00 AM

Favorite line among many: 'Sliding towards the light'...WOW Jayne, how did you come up with THAT? You never cease to amaze and I agree with Tim Smith's interpretation too...

Jayne Eggins
Date: 3/8/2014 9:12:00 AM

Hmmm not sure where that line come from Tim but I am very happy you enjoyed it :) thanks for dropping by to read sorry to be late answering I have been busy as this week love Jayne x

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/1/2014 10:43:00 AM

Another Jewel from Jayne! 7 Your pen dances in inspiration!! hugs, chuck

Jayne Eggins
Date: 3/8/2014 9:06:00 AM

I might call one of my books Jewels from Jayne lol thanks for the positive comment I am happy you liked it love Jayne x

Tim Smith

Date: 3/1/2014 9:24:00 AM

I saw Robert's comment. I thought the opposite. You were getting away from a bad marriage and taking your first breath of freedom ..........Hugs Tim

Jayne Eggins
Date: 3/8/2014 9:02:00 AM

Your right but it was a long relationship not a marriage we never seemed to get that far thanks for the insight love Jayne x

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2014 8:56:00 AM

Lovely...it reminds me of someone who has found freedom, no longer tied to a life that was becoming unbearable...and suffocating. Take care...paul

Jayne Eggins
Date: 3/8/2014 8:58:00 AM

Your partially right thanks for the read and your comment its very much appreciated love Jayne x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2014 7:34:00 AM

- Touching beautiful and written with emotion. - Thanks Jayne ! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jayne Eggins
Date: 3/1/2014 7:46:00 AM

Smile my weekend is half over down here its Sunday already... very happy you liked this one... take care love Jayne x

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/1/2014 7:10:00 AM

Nice description of a bride at the altar.

Jayne Eggins
Date: 3/1/2014 7:24:00 AM

It could be couldn't it ? I never looked at it that way, amazing the interpretations that can come from one poem love Jayne x

James Kelley

Date: 3/1/2014 6:49:00 AM

I love this, fantastic

Jayne Eggins
Date: 3/1/2014 6:51:00 AM

Thanks James glad you liked it love Jayne x