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Infinite Space

Dear infinite space, I watch as darkness blossoms and obscures the light, Glowing moon, diamond stars are the jewels that dress the night, Thus crowning abyss with immerse delight. I walk alone, yet I am not, Heaven, my heart has endlessly sought, A dose of happiness I believed i bought, Yet a dose of reality is what I got. I cry in silence, yet i m still heard, From poisoned truth i was not spared, As life, my strength challenged and dared. I m just a human with a deadline, My sins in bold scripture hit the headline, As my dna keeps procreating through my bloodline. My naked body dominates the catwalk, Pulsating desires my mind and thoughts stalk, Inscribing my life with a white chalk, To innocence i succumb and talk. So i seek in you dear infinite space, Superior in your wisdom, glazed in grace, Of your existence never leaving a trace, To one day reveal and show your face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/10/2015 10:36:00 PM
Laura, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/28/2014 6:18:00 AM
Hi Laura! Pleased to find another local 'girl' sharing her poetry on Soup. I enjoyed this introductory poem of yours; it shows that your pen is a capable one. Hope to see more poems of yours being posted here. Charmaine Chircop is another local who writes poetry of a high caliber...do seek out her posts...you won't be disappointed! Have a nice day. // paul
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Date: 12/26/2014 5:23:00 AM
- Warm welcome to P- soup, Laura :) - Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/25/2014 9:21:00 PM
Laura , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/23/2014 8:01:00 PM
Awesome personification of space and of being in space...I rate a 7...rgds, Thabang
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Date: 12/23/2014 7:41:00 PM
Very nice pen Laura! Enjoyed dear friend. Wish you and your family a very Merry Christmas! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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