Infinite

I climb the northern ridge to watch The lucent view of crystal sea, While dancing tides reflect the mist Atop the crown of ancient hills. And far below, the meadow bows To praise One's infinite design, Now drawn across a moonlit eve . My spirit bursts with heaven's flare As winds embrace my inner glow. .............. Contest of Rick Parise: Old or New Poem 10 Line Max Re-entered 10.2.1016 --------

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Rick Richardson

Date: 3/19/2014 6:19:00 AM

Each line a beauty.

Mark Peterson

Date: 1/10/2014 9:39:00 PM

Lovely, devotional poem. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2014 7:50:00 PM

Nette, I have been reading many of these winners. all good, but I am reading yours one of my last ones and it truly deserved a number one spot. Congrats.

Mark Taylor

Date: 1/8/2014 2:44:00 PM

congratulations! This is a very nice poem.

John Beam

Date: 1/8/2014 11:54:00 AM

congrats on win

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 1/8/2014 10:40:00 AM

wow!! a very beautiful poem. a grand winner indeed!! Big Big congratulations on your win friend Nette. Happy New Year again. I just spend my Christmas and new year in Bangkok ;) cheers!! ;)

Roger Horsch

Date: 1/8/2014 7:38:00 AM

A well deserved win Nette, I enjoyed your poem.....Hugs.....Roger

Stacey Brown

Date: 1/8/2014 6:42:00 AM

wonderful write! Congrats on this well deserved win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/8/2014 1:25:00 AM

Thanks for the entry and congratulations on fine win, nette

Mario De Paz

Date: 12/24/2013 9:52:00 AM

A real cosmic view! good luck for the contest

Mark Peterson

Date: 12/21/2013 2:33:00 AM

Vivid and embracing...humbling yet full of aspiration that the moment might be prolonged. I loved the culmination. Your poetry is magic.

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/19/2013 11:09:00 AM

For a moment, I thought you were talking about my new Xbox "One". I'd have collapsed in nerd smiles if you were. But, I know you weren't. That said, utterly incredible & atmospheric writing. =)

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/18/2013 7:28:00 PM

As One's infinite design this nature's message as expressed throughout your write is a glorious experience to see my friend! I really enjoyed reading this completely wondrous write here Nette! You surely have impressed me yet again with this fabulous poem! What a simply reverent piece, Great Work!!

Jack Horne

Date: 12/18/2013 4:22:00 PM

wow, simply awesome write here, Nette

Chris Boskovski

Date: 12/18/2013 3:17:00 PM

Wow what an interesting poem you wrote, I like it a lot! Great write Nette! Hugs :) xoxo

Zelene Desha

Date: 12/18/2013 1:18:00 PM

Very Zen-like and soothing.This caught the omnipresence of things , beings with heavenly words. Thank you as well for my win in your contest.

Leon Datu

Date: 12/18/2013 12:19:00 PM

The opening verse drew me in making me want to read more.You explored the beauty of nature and the universe through eternal undertones. Another masterpiece, Nette.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/18/2013 12:05:00 PM

- A beautiful view ..... listening to the waves .... gulls ...... silence --- : Peace - Beautiful Nette! - Have a nice day / night. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)