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Infectious Bar Floozy

Boozy Oozy Woozy Floozy Drug injected, boozy, oozy, Miss. Flu infected, woozy, floozy kiss. Written 1/20/18 Contest: Write Me a Tyburn Hosted by: Kim Rodrigues

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/15/2018 9:20:00 PM

Oh, this is charming, Rhoda, and for me, right up there with Luloo's ... wonderful Tyburn, Friend! Congrats! :-) <3

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/15/2018 11:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Friend. Your kindness charms me. I am humbled.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/3/2018 12:55:00 PM

Back with congrats!! My personal favourite ;P xomo!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/3/2018 11:53:00 PM

Awww...thank you, Maureen.

Jean Murray

Date: 2/2/2018 1:34:00 PM

How romantic! Well done.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/3/2018 12:32:00 AM

Lol. Jean. You make me grin. Thank you.

John Gondolf

Date: 2/2/2018 7:16:00 AM

Rhoda, back to say congrats for your win, well done!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/3/2018 12:32:00 AM

Thank you, John. Your kindness means a lot to me.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/1/2018 8:42:00 PM

Back with big congratulations on this great piece , Rhoda :)

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/1/2018 11:29:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. I've been away from soup writing so this was a nice surprise to see.

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/1/2018 8:08:00 PM

LOL - great one, Rhoda. Awesome rhythm and style. Congrats on your win.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/1/2018 11:29:00 PM

Thank you, Line. I'm humbled.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2018 7:57:00 PM

this was one of my favorites. Congrats for your win, Rhoda.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/1/2018 11:32:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I apologize for my absence. I've been working on a long piece. Maybe I'll post a chapter to get opinions.

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/1/2018 6:46:00 PM

Really funny, Rhoda! Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Sandra

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/1/2018 11:32:00 PM

Thank you very much Sandra

Curtis Moorman

Date: 2/1/2018 6:00:00 PM

I think the guy I saw in the alley barfing his guts out had just spent an evening with the lady in question. Still a great write for a difficult form.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/1/2018 11:33:00 PM

Lol. Thank you, Curtis. Apologize for my absence as of late. I'll make it back around.

Viv Wigley

Date: 2/1/2018 4:58:00 PM

Well done, Rhoda, allow me to pass you a box of tissues x

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/1/2018 11:35:00 PM

Lol, Viv. You may think it's green but it's snot. (a little play on words there) Thanks for coming around. I'll try to be a little more active here in the next week or so.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/1/2018 3:31:00 PM

Pleased to return with congratulations on your merited podium finish, Rhoda! Well done! Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/1/2018 11:36:00 PM

Thank you, Paul. I've found a good mentor in you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/1/2018 3:13:00 PM

Well done Rhoda Regards Tom

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/1/2018 11:37:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. Couldn't do it without the support and friendship of people like you.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/1/2018 2:22:00 PM

Congrats on 2nd place, Rhoda!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/1/2018 11:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim. I feel both humbled and honored.

Edward Mccall

Date: 1/28/2018 5:45:00 PM

Too funny Rhoda, just too funny. :-) :-)

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/30/2018 8:22:00 PM

Thank you, Edward. Sorry I've been so absent. Been working on my suspense/thriller.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/25/2018 9:07:00 AM

Very cool and humorous.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/25/2018 6:01:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Rick.

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/25/2018 8:52:00 AM

LOL EWWW RHODA! I needed a laugh today and you and Jan came through. Thank you!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/25/2018 6:00:00 PM

Hi Shadow. Glad I could make you laugh. I, personally, wanted to vomit. Lol. But yeah, I tried for humor so I'm honored it came across that way to you. Success! Thanks for stopping in and for your support.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/23/2018 6:21:00 AM

Pissy powerful gut hurl this Tyburn poem be, Rhoda! This most definitely is a straight-up non-sober floozy. Great write. Love and hugs always.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/24/2018 4:35:00 AM

Thank you, Freddie. I can't believe I wrote this as it made my own stomach roil. Thank you for visiting, Dear. Love and hugs in return.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/22/2018 11:15:00 AM

Hey..this is not fair! I was the first to comment on this humorous Tyburn, Rhoda, and now I find that my comment has disappeared!! You make this awkward, restrictive form look easy. gl in the contest:) Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/22/2018 12:11:00 PM

I'm sorry, Paul. I remember you commented. I don't know wtf happened. You're a Dearheart. Now I wonder where my other 23 comments on this poem went. Lol. Thanks for your support, my Dearheart.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/22/2018 9:33:00 AM

This is brilliant, Rhoda, you made me smile:) Hugs Eve

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/22/2018 5:48:00 PM

Lol. That's great, Eve. Glad I could make you smile. Thank you for your support of my writing.

John Fleming

Date: 1/22/2018 3:07:00 AM

My goodness, Rhoda! I am not surprised in the very slightest at the sub-title -- the verse certainly does make ones head spin! An incredibly powerful impression you have managed to create here with such a few words...I am very impressed at the overall impact it makes -- I actually felt giddy reading it! Very cleverly penned, Rhoda. My very warmest regards. :) john

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/22/2018 5:47:00 PM

Thank you so very much, John, for gracing my account with you kind words of encouragement. Glad you enjoyed this Tyburn form. First time I've heard of it or tried it and it was interesting and fun. Hugs, John.

John Lawless

Date: 1/21/2018 1:15:00 PM

a double dose of aftermath....interesting take on the form....worked very well

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/21/2018 4:58:00 PM

Lol. Thank you, John. Much appreciated.

James Swartz

Date: 1/21/2018 8:19:00 AM

Very awesome write Rhoda! Very descriptive and oozes with creative. This reminds me of my youth when i may not have dismissed her and paid the price later. Now in my more mature years i know the difference.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/21/2018 10:28:00 AM

Thank you, James. We all had our "stupid years" didn't we? Thank you, also, for being persistent about writing my book. You are a Dearheart.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/21/2018 12:19:00 AM

Made me smile! :)

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/21/2018 2:13:00 AM

Lol. Thanks, Arthur. Such a charmer I am, eh? Thanks for your kindness. Glad I could make you smile.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/20/2018 10:27:00 PM

Ah I love it!!! You knocked this one out of the park, I expect to see it on the winners list :) xomo my best to you Rhoda! xomo

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/20/2018 10:44:00 PM

Thank you, Maureen. I'm humbled. It is a fun contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2018 8:25:00 PM

hahaha. You guys around here are making these look easier than I thought. I only did one tyburn in my life and it was so hard for me. Way to go doing this one. It's REALLY good and funny.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/20/2018 10:43:00 PM

Andrea...I started first with the word 'naughty' and couldn't find enough rhyming words. With this one, I still had 'snoozy' in reserve. Lol. It's a fun contest and prompted me to try a new form so it's a winning situation either way. Thanks so much for your kindness and encouragement