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Fingers barely touch tension beneath fabric--- wet spot appears Written by: Richard Lamoureux for Natural/ originaly for Nature Sexy Haiku Contest. still a favorite

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Date: 2/23/2013 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Richard...(^_____^) Good day
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Date: 2/22/2013 6:35:00 PM
oooh, steamy!!! (unless it is describing when a woman spurts milk from her baby touching her nursing apparatus. heehee. I used to hate that). Big congrats to you. I love this one too.
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:34:00 AM
Hi congratulations Richard, great haiku, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2013 6:39:00 AM
Thanks Mandy
Date: 2/21/2013 7:23:00 PM
congrats on your win Richard
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Date: 2/21/2013 6:12:00 PM
Richard ,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA
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Date: 11/9/2012 2:41:00 PM
Nice Haiku, Richard... Good luck in the contest... Terry
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Date: 11/9/2012 11:05:00 AM
Should do good in the contest!Enjoyed the read.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2012 12:28:00 PM
Thanks Kash Appreciate you stpping by to read.
Date: 11/9/2012 9:47:00 AM
I had to laugh at this. Just for the suddenness...have you ever listened to the band The Lonely Island? They have a song called In My Pants...and this reminded me of it...if you haven't heard of them check it out their good for some laughs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2012 12:29:00 PM
I will look it up. Thanks for reading.

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