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Inertia

There were so many things. All off them unsaid. The room between us, bare unforgiving, the silence unbearable, his rhymic breathing a broken clock, counting down the waiting deep into the emptiness of my prayers raging through choices not made. Me sitting by his bed until he was dead. There were so many things, that remained unsaid.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/30/2013 10:07:00 AM
- Hello new member: Bernard. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/27/2013 8:37:00 PM
Bernard,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/27/2013 1:04:00 PM
Hello Bernard, wow, the direction of the unsaid words, will always take a toll in the long run. very sad, and deep. thank you for sharing your first poem on the soup... always~ LINDA
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