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Indulgent Love

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Like melted chocolate, words dripping from his velvety tongue rippled to her heart; she tasted their rich flavor, inhaled the aroma, succumbing to emotional intoxication. She craved for more... Seduced by luxuriant words, her defenses weakened, overpowered by an irresistible urge to bathe in love’s indulgence. Opulent pleasures caressed her thoughts. Each syllable drew a sigh. Her wish: to be sated His unspoken promise: to fill her with abandon – to thrill her. She no longer dared inhibit the demands her soul was making; this was hers for the taking. Warning signs: DENIED! She tasted the sweetness gratifying her cravings in his indulgent love. A Collaboration between Paul Callus and Eileen Manassian

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/9/2017 7:21:00 PM

I have never seen chocolate so suductive? well done:-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/14/2016 7:50:00 AM

I thought I would indulge in some creative wordplay. Hugs Rick

Paul Callus

Date: 5/10/2016 5:27:00 PM

Hi Eileen:) Stopping by to thank you for being such a wonderful collaborator ... and to read the lovely comments posted here. Each of them deserve some chocolate as a treat:) hugs // paul

Funom Makama

Date: 5/9/2016 12:46:00 PM

Absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A great 7 for me friend.

Joseph May

Date: 5/2/2016 11:26:00 PM

Beautiful collaboration you two....enjoyed

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/2/2016 7:30:00 AM

You and Paul definately brought out the ooey gooey goodness in this one Eileen. Hugs Rick. 7 all the way.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2016 8:19:00 AM

You honor us with your comment. Paul always knows when I need encouragement. He gives me prompts right up my lane...I'm grateful to him. Thanks for the visit. Hugs

Lewis Raynes

Date: 5/1/2016 9:21:00 PM

a beautiful write you guys, so mega seductive and tasteful Eileen, :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2016 12:21:00 AM

Thanks, Lewis. I enjoy writing on this theme. Paul is well aware of that and has written 5 other collabs with me that all revolve around love, romance, and passion. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Lin Lane

Date: 5/1/2016 6:13:00 PM

I must give you the same credit that I left on Paul's post. Eileen, your joint writing is a beautiful and tasteful seduction in each line.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2016 12:25:00 AM

Lin Lane, your opinion of the content and nature of my writes is very important to me. You are a woman of faith, and if you can give your blessing on a write...I feel I haven't crossed any lines. I hope that you believe the sincerity of my words on this. :) I appreciate your post...and your kindness. Hugs, dear.

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/1/2016 2:07:00 PM

What a wonderful collaboration, you both know how to get the tastebuds dripping and the soul speaking an irresistible language. Well done ;)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2016 12:25:00 AM

What poetic post, Cas. :) I'm beaming with your praise. Thank you, dear.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/1/2016 1:24:00 PM

I could easily get in the gutter after reading such heat and then seeing: Collaboration between ... . I don't know if you follow, but I've had my grin. Heat it is and I hope everyone has experienced what y'all did such a great job delivering in the fine, sensual poem that has truly woken my sensual memories ... CayCay (read "Unbound" - third down) good to be here and I look forward to returning with more time to spend with your work. Hope you are golden

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2016 12:26:00 AM

;) You are teasing, dear. I get it.....I will be by to read Unbound. Sounds absolutely enchanting. Thanks, CayCay. I'm glad you've passed by to visit...and that you found this to your liking. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/1/2016 12:04:00 PM

- ..... once tasted ..... wanting more .... :) - Sensual and beautiful Eileen & Paul - hugs // Sun :) - Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2016 12:30:00 AM

This kind of love....is one to be relished, my dear. I'm glad we could write about a love that is indulgent, and thus, irresistible. You bring warmth...once again. Hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 5/1/2016 11:52:00 AM

This brought a smile to face...what a sensual write done so tastefully...Love it you two...a fave

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2016 12:26:00 AM

Thanks, Tim. This is our sixth collab, I believe. Do visit it on his page when he posts. I like how it turned out. Paul knows just want prompts to give me...Words...chocolate...love...passion. Where can that go wrong? Hugs :)