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Indulgence

Indulgence An evening walk in the nearby park, As eyes follow in wait for my love, And soul floats up serene as I feel his spark, Melody put to strings sets the beats off, Symphony of words that turns to poetry all above ! Written Feb 6th, 2015 For contest"Indulgence" by Shadow Hamilton Awarded 1st place win

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Date: 2/18/2015 9:46:00 PM
Nice win...PD
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:46:00 PM
Dr Upma, CONGRATULATIONS, in Shadow's indulgence contest! -LUV- SKAT
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Date: 2/11/2015 8:34:00 PM
Such a romantic indulgence, Dr. Upma! Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 2/11/2015 2:30:00 PM
Lovely poem Dr Sharma:-) Many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/11/2015 9:55:00 AM
Congrats on win Upma. God bless..
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/11/2015 10:32:00 AM
Thnx Rajat !
Date: 2/11/2015 8:16:00 AM
lovely poem Dr Upma... congrats.. nad
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/11/2015 8:39:00 AM
Thnx nadiya
Date: 2/11/2015 8:05:00 AM
Lovely Upma, congrats.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/11/2015 8:40:00 AM
Thnx Richard! Appreciate ur visit!
Date: 2/11/2015 5:54:00 AM
you set the scene so beautifully Dr Upma a delightful pen congrats on 1st place hugs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/11/2015 10:29:00 AM
Glad u liked my poem Shadow! Appreciate encouragement!
Date: 2/6/2015 6:38:00 PM
Some of the best luxuries in life do not need to cost a thing... I enjoyed your lovely romantic write, Dr. Upma. It is nicely rhymed and flows well... Good luck in Shadow's contest!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/11/2015 10:24:00 AM
Thnx Kelly for ur very sweet words!
Date: 2/6/2015 8:45:00 AM
AREN'T YOU SWEET MY DEAR DR UPMA! I"VE MISSED YOU! This is a lovely, sweet and melodic write. Good luck in the contest.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/11/2015 10:22:00 AM
Ah u r so very kind to me dear Eileen! Thnx for ur very encouraging words!

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