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Inductible Loves Deductable

I don't beieve that it's real All of the time that we've wasted All of what time just won't heal  The sick vengeance I've tasted  The times I returned The times I recall Always so disconcerned With who's taking the fall Laughing at me while I'm laughing at you As if I'm a child You keep hiding the truth And I sit with a smile Wearing your noose Just passing the time As if I'm of use All the while in my mind There's a voice coming through Telling me what is right Telling me what to do The time is coming  Because times running out Will you keep on running On every account My being can't stay Through these constant obstructions I must find a new way I must make the deduction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/2/2010 2:49:00 AM
Excellent piece, love the phrase "I sit with a smile wearing your noose" ending with the hope/need to find a new way. TY by the way for your comment on "Way of Temptation"
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:17:00 AM
Wonderful write Jasmine Jade and welcome to the poetry soup family of poets ... your creative write is amazingly put into words so emotional and passionate in substance... thankxxx for your input omment onto my blog and joining in the fun of birthday celebrations.. I also have a contest posted on site VIVA VACATION.. so u are welcome to enter ...luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 4/28/2010 9:30:00 PM
a piece full of deep reality and convistion sounds like maybe some changes are coming in some way in a relationship,,I hopethings improve in some way,,I always say be happy,,if a relationship will work it will if and especially if both persons are unhappy then it should be set apart,,anyway a great write and I want to Thank you for reading and commenting on my words,,,Blessings..Cecil....PS you have soup mail.
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Date: 4/28/2010 8:34:00 PM
Interesting Jasmine. I like the flow and I can empathize. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 4/28/2010 8:34:00 PM
Wow! Excellent work. This was a very powerful and strong poem. I understand these feeling well. i stayed in a bad marriage far too long but I was being hard headed and would not leave my son. I now know the divorce was the best thing for me. I have found the true love of a lifetime and know she is my soul mate. Excellent poem!!!
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Date: 4/28/2010 8:34:00 PM
Reminds me of my parents. Nicely written. Qui.
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