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Indolent Thought

Aspirations and labor will tire your sinew And when all the wearying drudgery is through Some slovenly fool will give you a careless burial And take charge of your estate – proud and imperial. This is the thinking of a million languid loafers Who expect to accede to some easy coffers When some hardworking fellow of their blood dies, To drink of their vines as they yield to worms and flies. While the industrious son prays for father’s long life The indolent one’s heart is ever filled with inner strife When the old man’s health flourishes like wild grass, Wondering why the old fella wants to outlive the stars.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/24/2015 3:11:00 AM
Wow...powerful piece here. I really love the second stanza in particular. I am in awe of your work!! Amazing job! Always, Laura
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Date: 7/22/2015 4:41:00 PM
Very wise thoughts, for they are true to the end, sadly enough. Love your ending line but would look at changing the one before it to keep rhyme scheme intact. It will give more strength to your ending.~Jan
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Date: 7/21/2015 3:17:00 PM
Ooooh, I love this! So dark and defiant. Thank you for the visit earlier, Hann. xoxoxo
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Date: 7/12/2015 3:02:00 PM
Hi Hannington, well written verse and very poignant. Perhaps giving what one has to charity of one's choice is the better option!!
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Date: 7/14/2015 4:30:00 AM
Correct. Thanks for your wise comment...

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