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Indiana Jones

The passionate...pulsating rhythm, Of your tasty...temple of doom. Pounds a pummeling throb, While hunting for buried treasure. A lustrous...look like acid rain, A hopeful...heart, a buried jewel. My whip...willingly...whips, A love escapade unwinds. I raid your beautiful...body Looking for the lost ark in the dark. Erotic...exploration begins; I explore a deeper crevice. Solely...searching a secret tunnel, Investigating, probing, and panting, In the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull. With my trusty archeological tool. Hot wax poured...sizzling burns The crimson scented wax streams On this secret quest for love, A stimulating last crusade. Drops of salty...sweat Bead from my fatigued...face Dripping into the abyss of covers And on the glistening skin. Contrast: hitting the shiny...skin The splash sound...is amplified. A magnified grimace of pleasure Protrudes the dark silhouette. Steamy...lava skin yearns, For a cool touch to extinguish The heat of human friction while Luscious...lips call out Dr. Jones. ____________________________ *Posted for an anonymous request To write more free verse...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/1/2009 6:10:00 PM
You Rock at Free Verse...............Danielle
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Date: 3/29/2009 8:55:00 PM
Very hot and passionate..MY MY MY,You really went out on this one, Indiana Jones was rockin wild, really wild..You took this free verse to a whole different level..LOL, shocking!!!Incredible imagery here....You took the reader on a passionate journey full of adventure and pleasure..Awesome indeed...Keep em coming, GB Always, Tyesha
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Date: 3/29/2009 10:02:00 AM
This one is funny, but cleverly put together. You crack me up.
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Date: 3/29/2009 12:56:00 AM
You captured that beautifully, again fav poem, 7/7, Aleera
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Date: 3/28/2009 11:38:00 PM
An erotic adventure Indy was on, nice word use.
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Date: 3/28/2009 12:35:00 AM
Excellent piece , Raul and another side to your writing capability ....
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Date: 3/27/2009 10:02:00 PM
Enchanting write, masterful free verse, I would also love to see more. Your detail jumps into the mind and paints a vivid picture. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 3/27/2009 5:14:00 PM
Ummm... Raul, I was not expecting this from you...lol, good read, I suggest also you do more free verse. You penn well in this form. Lucinda
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Date: 3/27/2009 1:26:00 PM
This simmers with allusion and adventure between the sheets, my friend, like a well earned conquest. Enjoyable! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 3/27/2009 12:30:00 PM
Raul, this is a very passionate write filled with great imagery! Very creatively, done! A great response to the request! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/27/2009 8:56:00 AM
Like the alliteration Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/27/2009 8:28:00 AM
Passionate work, Raul! I'm seeing a new side of you, and your free verse style is awesome!!
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Date: 3/27/2009 8:17:00 AM
My God this was a ride-- well done
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Date: 3/27/2009 8:14:00 AM
Ma's so proud LOL You go guy! Light & Love Naughty Dorothy please!
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Date: 3/27/2009 8:03:00 AM
Whoever asked you to post more free verse...did the rest of us a favor!! :) This is awesome!!
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Date: 3/27/2009 5:50:00 AM
Ok Indiana, you captured my interest with this write! Hmm...lots of interesting visuals here to say the least. Quite exciting and hot! Awesome writing Raul! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/27/2009 5:08:00 AM
This is a very steamy interesting write...I am blushing..LOL..great work.
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Date: 3/27/2009 3:03:00 AM
Steamy write Raul, you can write anything can't you? Your work is fire. DN
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Date: 3/27/2009 2:51:00 AM
Wow, I'm starting to dig your free verse. A differnt side you haven't posted, nice job. An erotic adventure of Indiana Jones, who would of thought? Only your mind would think of this, keep it up, for real. Tyler
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