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Indian Village

Indian village red ribbons on grouped girls' hairs vessels rest on waist on the way to pond walk slowly with soft foot steps anklets sound music talk and laugh loudly bangles bang with ups and down hands unknown lyrics adds to nature's scene chirping birds with sweet sound sing a living video

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/14/2016 3:34:00 AM

An Indian village with intriguing personalities. The anklet music would be pretty to hear, I imagine ... great ending line to this haiku collage, as a video plays in my head as I read through.

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/14/2016 7:18:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2016 5:37:00 PM

this is pretty!! It is truly like a living video.

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/13/2016 4:23:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2016 4:35:00 PM

the beauty of nature only a beautiful soul can capture so wonderfully :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/13/2016 4:22:00 AM

Thanks my lovely *friend for stopping by on my poem. Loved always, bl

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/11/2016 11:38:00 PM

Very very brilliant write. A perfect presentation of Indian village. Smell of India is coming from ur entire poem. Thank u Mr. Devnath for entertaining me.............with love.

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/12/2016 7:09:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your uplifting comment and credit. Loved always, bl