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Indian Givers

The once was a Native American Navajo Who served his country and to war did go. He wrote codes by the score Which helped end the war But came home to no fame, “Oh, no.” The World War II ends in ‘45 Choctaw and Comanche side by side Broke the back of the Fuhrer Our messages got through sure! With out their gift we’d not stem the tide! It took fifty five years and more For the US to give medals they wore Many went to their graves Still feeling enslaved But, Congressional Gold the corpse bore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/30/2010 7:39:00 AM
nicely put Deb..... and did you also know that the second-most-decorated soldier of WW II was a native American.... I feel real sympathy for these people....well done on your win in the contest .......Syd
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Date: 12/27/2010 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2010 6:42:00 AM
Deborah, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Typical American Whitemen, who took so long to honour the Wind Talkers. For such a short history, they have so many apologies to make, unbelievable. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)
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Date: 12/27/2010 5:51:00 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. What a true tale you tell with this amazing piece Eamon
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Date: 12/26/2010 11:49:00 PM
I love how you took this challenge, Deb. VEry good entry and congratulations, Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/26/2010 7:45:00 PM
Many congratulations dear Deborah for this super win. A very Happy New Year to you and your family.
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:05:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry .. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 12/26/2010 7:22:00 AM
thumbs up for humor at its finest, deborah... KUDOS to you and your ein! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Deb
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Date: 12/25/2010 11:13:00 PM
D.G., CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.
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Date: 12/11/2010 5:33:00 PM
GReat positive way to play on the expression indian givers, Deb. It's so true they were not ever appreciated enough, same with the blacks who fought in the wars, and today's soldiers coming from Mexico and fighting in our wars. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/11/2010 4:32:00 PM
And God forbid, had they not cooperated, Deb! They were and are brilliant..so much they had to offer, but always were ridiculed, overlooked and treated as dirt by the ignorant ones of society....Love, Audrey Thanks for your comment on "Never again". Yes, it must have been tough for John Heck..lol Judging is not as easy as it seems, I've learned.
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Date: 12/11/2010 2:17:00 PM
The code-breakers were cool! good poem Deb....I still feel by entering your write in this racist contest (did you read suggestions for ridicule?) you validate the contest, no matter the poem's message......sunset rider
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Date: 12/11/2010 2:12:00 PM
Oh, good job! This is a wonderful tribute to the code breakers of WWII. This contest is really proving how poetry can be used to celebrate a culture that has so often been denied its place in history. Good, good poem.
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Date: 12/11/2010 1:28:00 PM
Native Americans gave much to our culture, Deb, and as you described so well, they came through with a code no one could break in World War II. Like this positive approach to the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 12/11/2010 1:18:00 PM
I enjoyed the nice interpretations of the phrase Indian Giver, Deb. appreciate your spirit.
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Date: 12/11/2010 12:57:00 PM
Good for you, Miss Debbie!! This is in fact, part of a war's history, that many people do not know and should be remembered and acknowledged. Hooray that you brought it again to light.
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Date: 12/11/2010 12:53:00 PM
Well done, the spirits of the Ojibwe, which runs in my blood, are standing proud as I read this, you did an excellecent job Deborah of turning the phrase into something beautiful, in my city there is the most breathtaking monument dedicated to the Canadian Indians who fought in WW11, I will try to find a picture of it and post on a blog~~ Dear Heart
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Date: 12/11/2010 12:02:00 PM
What a woderful message and powerful tribute Deborah! Well done! Lay
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Date: 12/11/2010 10:25:00 AM
Well written and a important message given out...best of luck in contest....Michael
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