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Independence Day

All hail for the Red, White, and Blue I always thought I'd spend it with you but now it's here and you are gone and I'm spending it all alone That's okay for at least I know I can count on me wherever I go to always be true and always there which is more than I can say for you, my dear No more wondering and kept in the dark if we'll be together or grow apart You showed your colors ever so true and all you left me with is blue I wished I'd known so many months ago that you would leave me when I needed you most One day you'll need someone too and they will leave you with only blue So think real hard next time you run about all the things that you have done Who will be there in the end Happy Independence day, my friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/5/2009 6:53:00 AM
You are better off being independent.....and strong. Happy Independence Day (both kinds)!
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Date: 7/4/2009 10:41:00 PM
You deserve independence from this "friend," TuLisha. I found the word choice and rhythm curiously amusing, but you can certainly tell where this is coming from. This friend's true colors seem pretty dark and your spirit is too bright to be confined by someone like this. Shine on, friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/4/2009 1:20:00 PM
Never lose self in someone else, True blue. Way to go, sow yourself. Love Moses
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