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Incubus

Arms spread; you were nailed to the living room wall Struck dumb; I could not heed your faint, pleading call

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/2/2012 12:15:00 PM
riveting piece , tom... beautiful work and good show of strong emotion...:) huggs
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Date: 10/27/2012 4:37:00 PM
i like this you should read feed upon my soul its also kown as succubus 5stars
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Date: 10/25/2012 6:44:00 AM
Very nice Tim!Congrats on the win.
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Date: 10/24/2012 8:01:00 AM
glad i've seen this wonderful poem, and congrats for your placement in Deb's contest...
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Date: 10/23/2012 7:18:00 PM
TIM, CONGRATULATIONS IN DEBBIE'S Two Timer's"" CONTEST... ALWAYS~ pd
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Date: 10/23/2012 3:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Tim - oxox big hug to you - // Anne-Lise <@<@<@<@<
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Date: 10/23/2012 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Tim! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/23/2012 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2012 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win xx
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Date: 10/23/2012 1:23:00 AM
congratulations on your win friend Tim :) cheers!!! (^_^)
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Date: 10/23/2012 12:59:00 AM
Beautiful Tim. Many congrats for this win luv.
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:16:00 PM
CONGRATS TIM ON A DYNAMIC WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/22/2012 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations on a winning two line poem.
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Date: 10/22/2012 6:18:00 PM
Well you my fine friend are not one for a woman who is faint of heart [how did you know my fantasy?? ;)] Congrad's on your big win! Cher Light & Love
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Date: 10/22/2012 4:00:00 PM
Hi Tim, wow..this image is scary... good luck...pd
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:30:00 PM
oooh, a good one for a Halloween entry too!! congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/22/2012 10:59:00 AM
By jove I think you've got it!! HUZZAH Light & Love
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