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Incomplete By Collice Rodrigues

Even though you sit so close to me Seems together happy we could never be As hard I try to get you close I get pricked by the thorn of the stem of a rose Your tear drop feels like a thousand pins I’d rather burn to ashes for my countless sins You’re a Lily on the water, to get you I try But as soon as I come close, the pond runs dry Try as much I would never understand The pain you feel as i leave your hand I want to tell you that every moment I miss The love that we had at the time of our first kiss I hope that someday will surely come When our love will every strife overcome I hope that someday our hearts will surely meet Till then like the crescent moon I’ll remain incomplete -Collice Rodrigues 5/10/2010

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Date: 9/15/2011 8:24:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Collice. Let the words continue to flow from your pen. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/15/2011 1:46:00 PM
Its nice to have you reading my poems :)
Date: 9/15/2011 7:06:00 AM
Excellent job...
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Date: 9/15/2011 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Jude....
Date: 9/15/2011 5:14:00 AM
ITS A POEM ABOUT A BOY WHO IS FEELING THAT HIS LOVE FILLED RELATION IS FADING AND SO WANTS HIS PARTNER TO KNOW HOW INCOMPLETE HE IS WITHOUT HER
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Date: 9/14/2011 1:10:00 PM
ah so romantic, expressions of the heart, beautiful for the soul to ponder. excellent write
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Date: 9/15/2011 5:17:00 AM
thank you Mr. Cooke its nice to read your comment hope you like my other poems too....i haven't uploaded many as i am just a new member to this website....ill be uploading new poems in due course of time :)

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