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Incomplete

Light fades hard darkness falls All hope is lost for my broken heart Swallowed up by pain pain I can't bear Where is my light to guide me outta here Fate has torn a hole in my heart too large for me to repair Why did you have to twist the knife so far into my aching heart You said you'd never leave "take my hand and trust", you said Now you are so far away and all I feel inside is dead I thought our love was so solid we seemed to have everything Then one day you were gone and now I am left.... incomplete

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Date: 4/12/2009 5:37:00 AM
Hi Tulisha First of all let me say, It's so nice to meet you!A emotional powerhouse. Very well done. Reminds me of my poem Snowbird. Truly enjoyed. Happy day to you hun. Look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry in the future. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 4/7/2009 5:32:00 PM
oh but I have my dear Carolyn, thanks, this is an older poem. Glad you like it
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Date: 4/7/2009 2:38:00 PM
I can feel your pain in this heartfelt poem, TuLisha. I hope you find someone who makes you feel complete again. Love, Carolyn
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