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In Your Mind

Torrents of rain come pouring from the skyes Salt in your tears are burning in your eyes. The pain you have is like a knife cutting deep into Your skin. Your mind is in a turmoil you can not hold it in. By the time you think you have got it right for you It is to late. You think the world is against you no one is nice Or kind But this is called mental health it's all in your mind.

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Date: 11/4/2023 2:11:00 PM
a profound and insightful read, Paul. Many keep their pain alive in their pains resulting in poor mental health. Yet, I empathize with such individuals who can't seem to see past their self-created turmoil. Well done, Sara
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