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Below is the poem entitled IN WHOLE SYSTEM'S CRAFT which was written by poet BL Devnath. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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                                  If something is lost then something is gained
                                               either happiness or sorrow
                                    in bank deposits are there from we borrow

                                          If one gives other certainly receives 
                                         light comes means dark has gone out
                                           this is the way perhaps all about

                                           Under the process of filling up gaps 
                                               all and everything fall on traps
                                            bound to lie in whole system's craft

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:41:00 PM
    BL, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 9:28:00 PM
    Interesting verses, Bl. I especially liked the one relating our lives to bank deposits!!

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 1:40:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this one filled with truth..It would be great if enough light filled all men so that the darkness would be dispelled...Sara