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in ur eyes

In the night i closed my eyes
i was trying to sleep
after sometime a message beeped..
he said i cannot be yours coz now i love someone else
i could not believe what i read and my face became tense
i tried to call him back
just to ask him what did i lack?
but he did not receive my call
between us there was a barrier very tall..
he messaged me please don't call
at that moment i had a great fall...
he said he had to leave
just because there was someone else more who could give
next day i asked him do you still love me?
his answer was why don't you just leave me
I saw the pain in his eyes too
is this all that other girl had to do?

dedicated to: u r the only one

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  1. Date: 1/10/2012 2:11:00 PM
    This has brought me sadness :o( But the write is good :o)