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In Too Deep

I'm drowning,gasping for air. Breathless often when you're around. Feeling overwhelped,weightless,and floating. The water gets any deeper,I'm a goner!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/21/2010 11:09:00 AM
AHHHH! SOMEBODY HELP FIND THE NEAREST HOT LIFEGUARD! love the write keep it up -RED
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