In Too Deep
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4 Lines from Any Song Contest January 11, 2024
Sponsored by Joseph May
You're too deep in, you can't get out
Of a river of emotions,
and you're drowning without a doubt,
holding on to love's devotions.
Tragic, when your whole world is black.
You're too deep in, you can't get out.
Memories hurt when they flashback.
Is this what heartache's all about?
Thirsting for love, but there's a drought.
Anguish is your gut reaction.
You're too deep in, you can't get out
and can't get no satisfaction.
You cry, "Look at me, I'm shattered!"
With anger and regret you shout,
"Love was everything that mattered!"
You're too deep in, you can't get out.
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You're too deep in, you can't get out ~ Rolling Stones * Emotional Rescue
When your whole world is black ~ Rolling Stones * Paint it Black
Can't get no satisfaction ~ Rolling Stones * Satisfaction
Look at me, I'm shattered ~ Rolling Stones * Shattered
Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2024
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