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In to the gloaming

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In to the gloaming

early evening
day following sunset
dare see changing good

dated 30-07-2013

written for the contest "One in three:write Beautifully" by Andrea Dietrich.

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  1. Date: 8/13/2013 2:40:00 PM
    I'm now seeing who wrote this one after my contest. It was a nice simple poem, Jenish. I was looking for more imagery and cinquain form does not allow much for that!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:40:00 PM
    Lovely snapshot of time progressing through the landscape ...a winner for sure. SuZ

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 2:55:00 AM
    Jenish Hi lovely gl in contest Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 5:04:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your input is appreciated...Sara

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 6:45:00 AM
    You paint us a beautiful landscape in a few words well done Jenish xxx