In Time

He told me how he felt tonight My heart, certain, was at a fright. I don’t know if I should be saying this, My feelings of sorrow and bliss. Could what he said be actually real Because this heart could no longer conceal. What I feel for him is true, Maybe until the time is through. What if he hurts me? I always fear. Will I give him the chance to go near? To own my most precious possession That is my heart’s affection. Someday soon I will find out, And no longer will I live in doubt. I’ll let him in my heart, And never will we part.

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James Fraser

Date: 5/31/2009 6:35:00 AM

Romance seems to flow through you Andrea, which a lovely feeling, nice write again, James

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/15/2008 6:31:00 PM

I like your approach to this poem. There is a time and season for everything under the sun. Everything will fall into place in due time. I like the essence of this piece and the logic behind the message. Great job! ~Joseph

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 10/14/2008 5:17:00 AM

All very good questions one asks when facing new loves and life experiences. The rhyme is very good as is the read itself. Nicely done my friend. Michael

George Anos

Date: 10/12/2008 9:25:00 PM

This is really something! You have a romantic bug biting you hehehe! brgds. George

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/12/2008 2:54:00 PM

Such a heartfelt poem. If he read it, I'm sure he would realize how afraid, and tender your heart is. Good luck in all you hope for, but whatever the outcome, remember you are so worthy. ~ Carrie

Deneen White

Date: 10/12/2008 11:55:00 AM

hi B I truly hope that things will work out for you, I pray things will go well, just take it nice and slow, hopefully he will treasure the part that makes you, you and that is your heart, nice heartfelt write, it touches the herat and it is filled with love hope and mystery, thank you or your comments, take care always, D-nyce