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In Thrall

In Thrall I’ve scooped plasma from the sun To cook meals and heat my bath, Moved Mount Everest just for fun; None can ever walk my path. I’ve had dinner on Saturn’s rings, Kicked the moon like a soccer ball, Plucked light rays like guitar strings— I should adorn the walls of great halls. I’ve swum the depths of every sea, Journeyed to the center of the Earth, Drunk molten magma like green tea; My mind suffers no dearth. I am the Law, the Order, and the King, Free! Only to my mind am I in thrall. I relish the escapes its figments bring, Finding ways out of my every fall. I’m a minstrel with an unchained mind Or some raving loony in sanity’s cloak. It’s no matter to what you are aligned, Life is easier if seen, in part, as a joke! Sept. 23, 2018

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Date: 1/25/2021 5:04:00 PM
What a fun poem to read ~ full of delightful fantasy and fabulous imagery. Bravo ~ what a delight to find it published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Date: 8/3/2021 3:23:00 PM
Thank you Line. I really glad you found it delightful. Thanks for the the compliments.
Date: 11/6/2018 7:24:00 PM
So true especially the last line. Nice!
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Date: 8/3/2021 3:23:00 PM
Thanks a lot Hamilton. I appreciate your stopping by.
Date: 10/29/2018 3:00:00 AM
Loved it! your rhymes were right on time
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Date: 8/3/2021 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Jay. Glad you loved it.
Date: 10/14/2018 1:37:00 PM
A delightful poem with an excellent lesson, Sandison. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 10/15/2018 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Line, glad you liked it. Sandison
Date: 10/11/2018 2:32:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your poem...Lovely...Charma.
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Date: 10/12/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thank you very much Charmaine. Glad you enjoyed it. Cheers, Sandison
Date: 10/10/2018 1:21:00 AM
good and marvel
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Date: 10/10/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Mohamed. Your visit is appreciated. Cheers, Sandison
Date: 10/10/2018 1:02:00 AM
I loved that :) Beautifully written . Full of fun and adventure :)
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Date: 10/10/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Maxie. Glad you loved it. Cheers, Sandison
Date: 10/9/2018 10:08:00 PM
I’m a minstrel with an unchained mind- absolutely lovely line
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Date: 10/10/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thank you Maytag. I love that line too. Cheers, Sandison
Date: 10/9/2018 9:27:00 PM
I like this poem a lot. I felt like I was on adventures and then I laughed out loud at the end.
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Date: 10/10/2018 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Relive. I am glad I took you on an adventure. Cheers, Sandison
Date: 10/9/2018 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your Lifetime membership! I just love this one!
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Date: 10/10/2018 4:09:00 PM
Dear Sunlite, thank you for for your kind comment. Cheers, Sandison
Date: 10/9/2018 5:53:00 PM
Very well written. Great imagination!
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Date: 10/10/2018 4:10:00 PM
Thank you very much Bonnie. I appreciate. Cheers, Sandison
Date: 10/4/2018 6:27:00 PM
Ooh fantastic Sandison! This One's going in the faves :) xomo!
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Date: 10/5/2018 2:53:00 PM
Thank you very much my friend. I am really glad you liked it. Sandison

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