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In This Very Moment

In This Very Moment/Your Eyes(by Josner Saintil) In this very moment... I look into your eyes 'Cause it's true you astound me Your beauty takes my breath away. And it's not because of the clothes you wear Or the things you say, But the stories your eyes tell me. In your eyes, I see something more Than appearance or fatal attraction. I see beyond your simple ways. I see compassion, love, and hope. Hilarious...but I mean the words I say. There is something special about you, Yet it's hidden deep inside. Your heart is slowly growing, A deep ocean bearing the tide. No, I'm not much Barely a mouthful you would say I don't dress or look like the cute guy My head is always in a book And sometimes I pray. But know if you let me, I would love you more than any man Not just 'cause you're fine But because with you... I'll have the world in my hands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/5/2015 10:08:00 PM
Josner, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Date: 3/7/2015 8:54:00 AM
Many congratulations.. great job...
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Date: 2/19/2015 6:12:00 PM
Josner, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**
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Date: 2/19/2015 12:59:00 PM
Josner, well writen, a 7 and congratulations on your winning poem. Blessings eve
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:54:00 AM
absolutely beautifully penned many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:26:00 AM
Josner, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "This Very Moment" if you'd like. Wishing you a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Josner Saintil
Date: 2/24/2015 6:19:00 AM
tHANKS. VERY MUCH. WHAT DID I WIN AGAIN? I HAVE NOT BEEN ON FOR A WHILE.

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