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In This Moment

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In This Moment

These soft petals falls on your golden hair
And created magic so sweet and so fair.
Like the sun's complexion bright
A soft crimson streaming light.

Dawn has come and we tread together
In the stillness of the air
In the silence of the fields and pastures
Beneath the skies painted fair.

We hold hands and a silent submission
Of tongues intertwined, in this love recession
Electric shocks, soothing play of aggression
Soft and slow into the fire of the night.

Musk-rose falls down petals on milky way, chocolate smooth lips
Fever running wild, immortal love grips.
Tantalizing pleasures sways in the rosy night
In every throbbing heartbeat in the crystal light.

Pigeons, Seagulls, Turtle doves, those signs of love
Clouds form words with silver pens above.
In regions of ice, that seem to entice
Regions of fire, soaked with desire.

We watch the blushing sun arise, you are in my arms
The soothing air lashes our backs, love alarms.
So sweet a magic we created in the air 
In this moment!

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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:35:00 AM
    A beautiful poem; very lovely.

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 6:47:00 AM
    there goes peter pan still looking for the tight mick has them under a silver moon

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:47:00 PM
    Very romantic piece of poetry that you've written here! I can definitely see the similarity in our styles when it comes to the imagery. Very nicely done! And, thank you for reading my poem "Serenity", and for your great comments. It really means so much!

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 10:15:00 AM
    the magic this was that created this write is just pulling the reader in, I just fell in love with your poetry again, much love ~always, Linda

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 8:50:00 PM
    Romance at its finest, Mustapha! Enjoyed fully! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:07:00 PM
    savoring your momentm mus... fine write as always; greeeat mood!..:) huggggs

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 7:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dear Nette, thanks for your kind review. Hugs to you.
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 12:26:00 AM
    Nice one Mustapha .......Seren

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 1:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Seren for your kind review. Nice to see you.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:47:00 PM
    What colorful romance with intense feeling of love

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 1:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Dr. Ram for your kind review. Much appreciated.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:35:00 PM
    Woe m this is oozing with romance hmmmm what. a lovely write, you paint a sweet picture in the mind,,, really enjoyed reading this piece today Thankyou my friend:)

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 1:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cherie for your kind review friend. Hugs
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:23:00 PM
    Beautiful and romantic piece.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 1:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard for your kind review. So nice to hear from you.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 3:43:00 PM
    I love the way you put nature in your poems, it shows your wonderful love of life. you are truly a wonderful poet, my friend....Peter

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/29/2013 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Peter I'm humbled by your kind compliment. Its so nice to see you.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 3:06:00 PM
    Hey, this one kind of goes along with my vibrant dream idea, except you are with a wonderful lover in that beauty of nature!!!

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/29/2013 5:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea for your kind review on my poem. Its so nice to hear from you.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:17:00 PM
    A lovely poem. My only issue is with "red crimson" ...crimson is red, redundant. Pleasure to read otherwise.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/29/2013 5:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Simoriah for your kind review. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:12:00 PM
    - This is beautiful, Mustapha !!!!! ...... a pleasure to read your new poem today ! - oxox // Anne-Lise

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/29/2013 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your kind review Anne- Lise. So nice to hear from you today