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In This Life

as everything seems to get better god drowns me once again all that's been asked for is a little light yet darkest prevails and hides my sight good things happen so rarely but always cast aside so quick my heart still pumps my blood still flows though my mind has fallen ill In this life this life called mine good things happen rarely yet they're cast aside just bring me hope that will last a life time

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Date: 5/16/2010 3:48:00 AM
Deep introspection of feelings
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Date: 5/15/2010 7:40:00 PM
I've been there. Read my Unanswered Cry. Hope you feel better soon.
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Date: 5/15/2010 7:25:00 PM
Every true poem I very much enjoyed it, life is a confusing thing ..
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