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In the Womb's Flow

Sunset waters ebb and flow, in shades of silver, gold and blue; megaliths arise, greet periwinkle skies while warm sands, traveling waves embrace. Eyes cast upon the horizon lines, greet gulls in heaven's play; a cavern frames old Sol's facade, as curlicue waves knit watery lace. 1-23-2023 BRIAN STRAND CONTEST NO 1178 Poetry Contest Brian Strand

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Date: 2/4/2023 7:54:00 PM
Dear M. L., your golden pen expresses the beauty of Nature in exquisite style. Simply superb! Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/8/2023 8:41:00 AM
Many thanks.
Date: 2/1/2023 10:47:00 AM
Such a wonderful picture of serenity at twilight on the beach ML! Love your "curlicue waves" as they "knit watery lace!" What an innovative image! Congratulations on your win!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/2/2023 11:07:00 AM
Many thanks Sam and I'm glad you enjoyed the piece.
Date: 2/1/2023 8:19:00 AM
Ahh...very nice ML. Congratulations on your win! :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/1/2023 9:21:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 1/23/2023 10:59:00 AM
A creative write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day writing away.........
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/27/2023 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Paula and you have a great weekend.
Date: 1/20/2023 3:37:00 PM
Wow, such imagery….gets my mind going, Beautiful vocabulary , ML Panagiota
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/20/2023 3:48:00 PM
Oh good, thanks.

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