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In the Valley

In the valley, a glistening kaleidoscope of celestial orbs dwells in an epic sky...on a bed of aster. My eyes are ravenous searching the timeless universe, a visual delight lying under an oasis of stars. Embraced in an exquisite night zephyr in a moment of cherished bliss, I am impervious to the tainted world. It's ironic how the nefarious coexists with the sublime, all one world depending on one's perception... I shed a tear with humility feeling insignificant in the vast universe, while pondering the simplicity of what is kismet... my life is in the hands of God, uncomplicated. I am the one which obscures my destined path. Knowing my fate has led me to the valley, with vigor I taste the moist, night air, breathing in the lilacs and lilies in bloom. I am under the auspices of the stars and their effusive gallivant across the glorious sky, all a testament to the beauty of creation. Tomorrow will be ecstasy, certainly, better than yesterday. Perhaps, even better than these minutes under an epic sky... in the valley. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, April 13, 2012 For Secret Contest (PD) Scrabble words used: kaleidoscope, glisten, celestial, dwell, epic, aster, ravenous, timeless, universe, delight, valley, oasis, exquisite, zephyr, cherish, bliss, impervious, tainted, ironic, nefarious, sublime, perception, humility, simplicity, kismet, vigor, moist, lilac, lily, auspice, effusive, gallivant, testament, ecstasy, yesterday, minutes.

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Date: 5/23/2012 6:55:00 PM
Congrats on your well written, well deserved 1st place, Rhonda. Truely outstanding. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 5/23/2012 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "SHHHH" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2012 5:02:00 AM
This took great skill! Wonderful! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/23/2012 2:33:00 AM
Congrats rhonda on your big new....it's well deserved win (jealous due)....now you can be a PM...it feels great right(I wanted the price too)...hahahahaha...great work dear...you deserve it
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Date: 5/22/2012 8:24:00 PM
congrats on your win Rhonda
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Date: 5/22/2012 8:02:00 PM
You really carried it off magnificently with this poem, sweetie. BIG Congrats!!!
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Date: 5/22/2012 4:11:00 PM
Rhonda,huge cograts on this win!! and all your fab works. you are a gifted poetess...yours was my pick over my own,lol, it is going to my favs! big hugs, love you bunches and bunches, deb
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Date: 5/22/2012 3:40:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Great list of words used..Sara
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:06:00 PM
Rhonda congrats on your brilliant win..David
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Date: 5/22/2012 1:23:00 PM
A real beauty. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/22/2012 1:19:00 PM
Okay! Here's my real comment. A huge congratulations with your number 1 entry in my contest... it was fun keeping this contest a secret.... i will soup mail you later on tonight... always..pd
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Date: 5/22/2012 1:18:00 PM
Dear, Rhonda.... wow...I'm the first to comment on your hidden poem....
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