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In the Tub

She sinks into wetness, releasing a long sigh, becomes suffused with the heat seeping into her bones. With eyes closed, she's drifting - the world outside, with all it’s turmoil, slowly fading. The spider moves along the rim, black legs in motion. Sensing a presence, her eyes spring open. A scream rends the silence. A hasty exit - water churning, bathtub abandoned, wet footprints leading out. The spider crawls on, oblivious.

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Date: 11/11/2014 5:49:00 PM
ha! i can picture it all perfectly! great poem...
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Cona Adams
Date: 11/12/2014 6:33:00 AM
Thanks for reading, Ilene. I'm in a poetry group where we respond to challenges. The challenge was simply, "In the Tub." It was amazing how different all those poems were.

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