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In the Thorny Eyes

In the thorny eyes Truthfully I stared right through His broken glass, in thousand pieces I redeemed my might... for the pain he felt Plain my night Not a memory inside, just an empty cloud Clinging for something more prudent For old times... Is it me my heart longing for a cracking sound! Is it me my heart pleading for the softest songs Yes your heart has been once brutal... Banished and forgotten... Though to me in thorny eyes I see you, standing fatally Comfort is what I’m here to mender you...my love In thorny eyes, you captured my laugh In thorny eyes you conquered my life Hardly believed, for your old silly mistakes... Known by your cruelty acts... I will cover you in many colours of light Crystallize your world in different stars And cross my heart, for old times... To reverse In thorny eyes...I loved.END

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/22/2013 9:25:00 AM
Very moving writing and unique metaphors! Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting on my verse. Light & Love
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