In the Sway

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dependent on your every whim the yoyo of just a single word moods that sway in ups and downs compromising an artificial game heart off kilter in the balance pummelled wobbly dazed and woozy AP: 3rd place 2022 Posted on June 26, 2022

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/26/2022 6:51:00 PM

'the yoyo of every single word' -- Wow! Now that's a memorable image, Line! Better than 'Duncan' did back in the day. ~ Walking the Dog

David Mchattie

Date: 6/26/2022 3:46:00 PM

Sounds like someone's in love with emotions going in all directions. Nicely written. Be well.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/26/2022 6:44:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, David ~