In the Still of the Night: Collaboration With Vlad

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In sorrow weeping upon your own bed I watch you now in sadness despairing Upon the pillow of pain lies your head Lost in the grief your temple is bearing My heart is light and it must come to you Fear not the shadow that comes from the storm For i do bring light in its golden hue To fill with peace your desirable form As i sit on the bed open your eyes Into sadness Soul i plainly do see Take my hand come with me to paradise I shall take you where you do wish to be I ever show you a beautiful sight We are the dream in the still of the night ~ Upon my bed countless tears i have spilled I shiver in grief while my heart grows cold Crushed by pain and promises unfulfilled Sorrows to burgeon my faint heart 'til old Please impede my fear and somber weeping You offer peace from shadows where i dwell With golden light hold me in safekeeping Raise me from the darkness in which i fell My eyes trust the benevolence in you Your hand offers me strength to leave my bed Lead me where i shall no longer feel blue To paradise my Soul pleads to be led We shall soar there among stars of great height Lost in our dream in the still of the night ~ You give me your hand and we float away Beyond the stars to a land light with dreams Hold close to me in each resplendent ray You are kissed by a rainbow of sunbeams To see the light that now shines in your eyes As your smile does light up your sunlit face The depth of your Love i now realize Come sit with me in dream's blissful space In this land of dreams your passion may flow Desire is your fire that shall ever burn Find all your peace for you know you must go When comes breaking day when the night does turn But know you may always feel this delight When darkness falls in the still of the night ~ Through a sky glittered with stars we travel To a rendezvous where our dreams come true I hold you tight as my fears unravel Sunbeams of light illuminates my view Paradise exists and my hope rebounds As we linger here nestled side by side Your intimate whispers are revered sounds My heart shall forget the tears I have cried This realm of dreams rekindled my sad Soul You ignited the flames that warmed my heart Peace and happiness has made me whole Each day I shall wait for twilight to start If you hold my hand my heart shall take flight When love calls us in the still of the night :....................................................................: Collaborative Sonnets with Vladislav Raven Thank you for the honor of sharing this celestial dream with you, Mike. April 26th, 2016

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Robert Lindley

Date: 4/29/2016 5:02:00 PM

Truly outstanding collaboration my friends. And in excellent sonnet form as well. Clearly a top 7 performance! CONGRATS ON CREATING THIS SHINING GEM..

John Hamilton

Date: 4/27/2016 6:23:00 PM

What an amazing write to both of you, I think I know who wrote what because i know your style Lin, but really this was a seamless duo a 7 from me!

Lin Lane
Date: 4/28/2016 9:19:00 AM

Thank you very much, John. You brought a smile to my lips when you wrote you know my style. Sweet comment.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/26/2016 7:49:00 AM

Hi Lin, thank you for allowing me to do this collaboration with you. It was a privilege, honour and pleasure. You did make it so easy with me. Welcome to the dreams of the dark man where the light can ever shine. You made this a beautiful write with your gentle words. You knew the concept of the dream so easily and that made the writing easier. May your dreams ever come from the light of Dreamscape. I now wonder what our next offering shall be. Hugs....Mike. XX. Has to be a seven Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/26/2016 7:53:00 AM

I thank you for asking me to share the Dreamscape with you. You find out what happens next when I have an inkling of where the next dreams takes us. Till then I know your light will keep shining. Thanks, Mike. You made it easy to follow your lead.