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In the Soup

A month ago I fell into a kettle of soup that was hot. Many chefs to stir the broth, and I've met quite a lot. I grew curious about what made the soup so unique So I thought I'd get busy reading poems to take a peek. I'm used to my native gumbo, which has a thicker base, but this soup is simmered with ingredients from every place. I've sampled and I've tasted and I'm loving all the flavor Of so many wonderful writings that I'm learning to savor. I'm impressed with the meat some good cooks throw in here. There are a few who'd like to add too much spice, I fear. Sometimes a little pinch of salt is tossed in for good measure, and it's beginning to have an aroma that gives me pleasure. It's said that too many cooks will often spoil the broth But I've not seen the evidence of a mouth oozing froth. I have witnessed those who one might consider flakes. Come on, where's your sense of humor...for goodness sakes! I discovered forms of poetry, the likes of which I'd never seen, Cinquain, tanka, and those that fit somewhere in between. I'd like to try my hand at them before going to my grave. It would mean leaving my rhyming zone, to which I'm enslaved. Maybe I should just make up a new form all on my own. I need to take a Zen moment, for my wits I'll need to hone. In addition to its name I'll need to determine how it goes. To rhyme or not to rhyme. Will it be free verse or maybe prose? I'm open to all suggestions from anyone within the loop. Let's find a new form of poetry to sweeten our Poetry Soup. No suggestion would I ever consider too outrageous or too silly. So lay them on me, Soupers. Do you think I'm serious? Really?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/3/2015 10:49:00 PM
Awes, so XOOL. I know the feeling of falling into this kettle. LOL, Glad, you are enjoying all the flavors. Thank you for giving me a wonderful reason to visit your poem(s) today. LINDA
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/3/2015 11:23:00 PM
I've become addicted to the taste of soup. ;) Thanks for the visit, Linda.
Date: 11/3/2015 6:51:00 PM
Lin, I really enjoyed reading this piece tonight. You captured the essence of what makes the soup so unique. I loved the humor as well. I have to visit your pen more often:-)Alexis 7
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Alexis Y.
Date: 11/3/2015 7:57:00 PM
I sure will:-)Alexis
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/3/2015 7:04:00 PM
Thank you for being so generous, Alexis. Please DO visit.
Date: 11/3/2015 1:15:00 PM
made me smile Lin great humourous write could do with more humour on the site:-) hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/3/2015 1:34:00 PM
Glad it made you smile, JAN ;)
Date: 11/3/2015 11:48:00 AM
Very sweet poem, Lin. :) I really enjoyed it very much. You have a great sense of humor. Welcome to the soup....I've wanted to come up with my own form and have tried two. I'll see how that goes. I'm vegetarian! ;) I did enjoy your banter with Silent One.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/3/2015 12:38:00 PM
Oh dessert...that's a whole new scenario. I'd give away my entire bowl of soup for a Banana Split or Hot Fudge Sundae.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/3/2015 12:31:00 PM
Oh....with pleasure, dear....with pleasure. I've been vegetarian for over 30 years. You can have my share....but I will NOT share my dessert! ;)
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/3/2015 12:28:00 PM
Many thanks, Eileen. A sense of humor is needed to balance the tribulations so many of us face. Take the hits but keep smiling. Here's the deal...you can have my veggies if you'll give me your portion of the meat.
Date: 11/3/2015 11:16:00 AM
A recipe for a fantastic flavoured soup, Well described. I enjoyed very muchly : )
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/3/2015 12:25:00 PM
Thank you, Mark. In the case of soups and stews, the more ingredients, the deeper the flavor.
Date: 11/3/2015 9:56:00 AM
You have described it well Lin. I enjoyed the flavours you have added.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/3/2015 10:21:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. It was a fun piece to write.

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