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In the Rising Clouds

In the rising clouds In the rising clouds of mind, Your image often gets formed But by the time The eyes can take the impression It hides some where and get lost The thirsty mind keep searching That image in every eyelid and heart In the dark lowering clouds Of rainy season Even amid the branches of trees In autumn Ravindra Kanpur India 05th Feb 2010 rkkapoor@sancharnet.in Originally written many years back in Hindi language Translated on 4th Feb 2010 010370

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Date: 4/6/2010 1:18:00 PM
Much for the reader to think about. Insightful poem. Glad you decided to translate it for us to enjoy. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 2/9/2010 9:24:00 PM
Nice write, interesting thoughts. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments today. Caroline.
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Date: 2/9/2010 6:21:00 AM
Great write and very romantic in its own way. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:27:00 PM
enjoyed reading toay
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Date: 2/5/2010 8:25:00 AM
It's interesting the way the images we see in clouds keep changing. That is the nature of clouds and also the nature of the human mind. Very profound writing, Ravindra. I wrote a poem about changing cloud formations "Behind the Clouds" that has an uplifting message. This is great writing! Love, Carolyn
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