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In the Pitch Dark

My lady called my name Deep in the pitch dark we played a game Tis the wonderful game of chess But in the dark it was more of a mess Two souls exhaled unabatedly in the dark Their mission - one could be sure, was no lark My entire being lurked excitingly in her garden My thoughts - from whence camest this wonderful maiden A degree of intense pleasure - simply unimaginable The excitement that engulfed us - certainly indescribable Our souls into one whole merged Our goal, finally we have achieved Now the night has grown much older We lay in the pitch dark much sober Reminiscing the immediate past encounter Oh my gosh, lets not forget our maker He set up this beautiful union Indeed we shall continue to accept his communion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/2/2010 11:33:00 AM
I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day Felix. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:50:00 PM
spicy work my friend... so eloquently put. Lay
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