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In the Now Being Taken

in the order of establishment and the movement of individual freedom.......... we cannot wait to be freed....yet have to find the inside need to see the motions accompanying nothingness are the gates to your inner mind. We find ourselves so comforted by civilisation..........society, norms & acceptance... that we lose what defines the deeper innner psyche......... ....each different to another

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Date: 2/28/2024 6:02:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/5/2016 3:53:00 PM
ALEXANDRA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA
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Date: 1/29/2011 4:09:00 PM
Well done Alexandra. I hope too see more of your work! I am also new to PoetrySoup. Please continue on.
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Date: 1/24/2011 3:50:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Alexandra. Please continue to write you will do very well. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/22/2011 8:23:00 AM
Nice perspective. You have explained yourself well. In your fouth line, were you trying to place "nothingness" instead of "nothiness"?
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Date: 1/22/2011 5:28:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... check out our contests too.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:40:00 AM
Very creative and interesting write, enjoyed it, Alexandra
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