In the Night - Waltz Wave

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(Waltz wave) The Sun is Go- Ing down And the moon Rises high Up As soon As the night Comes out In the sky Among The Playful Clouds and stars Shining Bright In the Night Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2009 November,09,2014

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/12/2014 11:59:00 AM

WOW!!! I love the way you played your words, a 7 my friend and one of my fav. poems :) blessing eve

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/12/2014 12:03:00 PM

Thank you very much Eve! :) xxxx D

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/12/2014 2:08:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely poem and a beautiful picture. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/12/2014 2:39:00 AM

Thank you Ravi! xxxx D

Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2014 9:45:00 AM

Well done Dorian! I'm enchanted by the enriched simplicity that abounds in these few words. I can imagine the sun and moon stretching out their hands as if wanting to hold on to that magical moment when they come face to face as day turns to night. A top7 rating! /x/ paul

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/12/2014 2:40:00 AM

Thank you kindly Paul! xxxx D