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In the Night

Darkness sifts through night A harsh dampness is instilled Chrysanthemum weeps
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/14/2012 1:04:00 PM
Russell, deep... good haiku... pd
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Date: 11/14/2012 10:10:00 AM
stirring me no end, russell... you are mastering this form, my friend with such a soulful rendition for this piece... much enjoyed!..;) huggs
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Date: 11/14/2012 2:02:00 AM
Love it....good haiku Russell - -Have a enjoyable day. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/13/2012 11:12:00 PM
This one is quite descriptive. I love that last line!
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Date: 11/13/2012 10:13:00 PM
SAD BUT GORGEOUS VISUAL TO VIEW RUSSELL LUV .. AMAZING IMAGERY WITH FOCAL POINT ON LAST LINE MY FRIEND .. A WRITING TRIUMPH LUV..
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