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Well, I must say that I did not want to walk two hours, some days I am downright tired of diabetes So I drove to Logonna Daoulas after a visit to the Kerdrein strike for the view of Brest, days it is the most beautiful city in the world, sometimes it is a city of big idiots, There I park on a strike, with a cd of samba (the schools of the carnival) it makes me think that the Brazilians are crazy, so there is energy in this music, And there it is magic, a fox passes five meters from my car motionless so and disappears on the beach, my adventure is just beginning I move and drive to the Bendy, I stop, there a doe disappears before my eyes in a field (weak light, but I note the white tuft on the rear train) I still walk a minute, to have clearer ideas, then drive to the village of Logonna Daoulas There I am on the same field as the other day, samba music, deep down, a doe stands straight and fixes the car, it’s very beautiful, Engine on I remain to look at her, she is not afraid, I lasted two minutes and I cracked, do not frighten the animals, I am still four hundred meters from the village, I rush to the national, then decides as if by a magical intuition to make a detour through Irvillac, it’s not Chicago, friends, just a small Breton village, and there better than the scene of fire of Atlanta in "gone with the wind", I see at about thirty meters, three deer with the tail leu leu, all three at the top of the field, in full contrast with the sky, on the horizon line, alas, I had not taken my camera, what regret (they continued their way, in single file (queue leu leu en français) on the crest of the field, really bright) I left and a kilometer further between Irvillac and Daoulas, I see a fox jumping in a field, he was hunting visibly I stopped, he was afraid and just drove off as fast as an arrow, let’s say that all this put me in shape, I have the impression that with spring, nature takes over Let us take care of this nature, let us no longer expand fields to infinity Good Sunday the on earth my friends

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Date: 4/8/2024 4:13:00 PM
Yann, this is very good remarkable poem. Very nice indeed. I do agree with you. I hope those big idiots that have the power and the money let the little ones that have nothing in their pockets, but intelligence enough to keep looking for their survival. Bravo Yann
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Date: 4/3/2024 1:11:00 AM
You do not get diabetes by eating too much. Normally it's inherited. I have decided to go for walks too.
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Date: 4/2/2024 9:15:00 PM
Dear Yann, I loved being able to enjoy the many sights of your adventurous trip with you. Thank you for sharing this exciting story. :)
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Date: 4/2/2024 5:41:00 AM
A wonderful write to read this morning! Oh what would we do if the world went silent of our beautiful creatures! I remember a pretty red fox running from the back to the front of my yard. So cool how God taps into our euphoria at such sightings. Our hearts beat and joy explodes. Bless you, Yann!
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Date: 4/2/2024 4:30:00 AM
also sending love and healing prayers for your health, love
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Date: 4/2/2024 4:29:00 AM
Isn't it wonderful when we can experience nature up close and personal as you did dear friend. So nice to view it through your eyes dear Yann :)
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Date: 4/1/2024 4:19:00 AM
Nature presents variety and beauty. With spring, the the fox and deer are once again out from their coverts. I hope you had an adventurous ride, spotting wild animals. Great account, dear Yaan. Hope you will be relieved of your diabetes with timely care and proper exercise.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/1/2024 5:16:00 PM
thanks valsa for the support and kindness, to relieve of diabetes is a dail task and need strong will, there are ups and downs, thanks for commenting my poem, i like walking it helps have a sweet week
Date: 4/1/2024 1:48:00 AM
I too suffer from diabetes 2, but I can never bring it down to the proper level. Driving in a car won't help though. Still your imagery is beautiful and alluring.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/1/2024 5:14:00 PM
thanks Victor so much, usually i walk one hour or two a day, but i don't like repeating everyday of the year, i drunk too much sugared beverages and ate smarties a lot when i was close to retiring, it is very dangerous, i didn't know that, take care and write excellent poetry, it is more interesting thanks poet
Date: 3/31/2024 5:02:00 PM
I felt a sense of awe and respect for nature in your poem. I can relate...when walking in nature I feel as if I'm communing with God and his creatures and also witnessing the miraculous, the peaceful intertwining of nature with me. I enjoyed walking with you Yann. Have a great evening, Sara
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Yann Rolland
Date: 3/31/2024 11:12:00 PM
thank you so much sar for the marvellous comment, walking in the nature is som kind of catharsis, yes indeed we can relate to God, as you say have a wonderful day
Date: 3/31/2024 4:29:00 AM
Great storytelling Yann..
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Yann Rolland
Date: 3/31/2024 11:13:00 PM
thanks a lot So , for the supportive comment
Date: 3/31/2024 1:58:00 AM
What a sincere and beautifully written write. I love the flow of your thoughts woven throughout, and thought to myself I love brazilian music too. And i can feel the struggles too with diabetes. And your ending leaves a very profound thought message to your readers, what more can we do besides be kind to nature. Pleasure reading your work
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Yann Rolland
Date: 3/31/2024 11:15:00 PM
thanks a lot IE, I send you some brazilian samba, your words touched me , i love sharing lives of animals for a while, God bless you

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