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In the Moonlight I Saw Her

In the moonlight I saw a girl.. As beautiful as an expensive pearl.. . Sitting in train on a chair... Falling on face,layer of brown hair.. . Head covered though But not fully.. She had managed that green scarf beautifully.. . With her nails touching her teeth,totally unaware.. That somebody is having at her,a continuous stare.. . Couldn't observe more about such wonderful creation... Because she left at the very next station..

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Date: 7/17/2014 8:34:00 AM
I like it, a very nice write. Vanishing girl, I remember such so well in my youth. So many times I failed to speak because I was in such awe of the beautiful lady. Such memories are treasure too.
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Saba Khan
Date: 7/18/2014 2:24:00 AM
Haha :P Thank you very much for visiting :)
Date: 6/9/2014 11:40:00 AM
Lovely write with nice twist at the end - well done!
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Saba Khan
Date: 6/11/2014 3:43:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/12/2014 12:54:00 AM
Nice piece. Thanks for commenting on my Mr and Miss Right.
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/15/2014 11:37:00 PM
My Pleasure :) Thanu :)

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