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In the Moment

In the moment 'tis but a second A fleeting glimpse an eyelid's blink In a jiffy Nothing flash The twinkling of an eye What do you think?

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Donna Jones

Date: 3/7/2015 9:29:00 AM

That's what it is-:-) congratulations..

Skat A

Date: 2/19/2015 6:04:00 PM

Michael, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**

Jan Allison

Date: 2/19/2015 1:22:00 PM

You portrayed this very well - congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2015 9:34:00 AM

Michael, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "This Very Moment" if you'd like. Wishing you a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA

Michael Birchmore
Date: 2/19/2015 2:45:00 PM

Thank you. I will.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/28/2014 5:12:00 PM

As fleeting as moments are, you managed to capture one skillfully and brilliantly in this piece! Bravo! Pandita

Michael Birchmore
Date: 12/29/2014 2:25:00 AM

Thank you Pandita

Frederic Parker

Date: 12/28/2014 10:45:00 AM

I think the moment has passed as your poem did express...captures the moment well..

Michael Birchmore
Date: 12/28/2014 11:14:00 AM

Thank you.