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In the Moment

Here and now, I sweep away stress of day and breathe in contentment for only myself. Finally alone, as thoughts come alive, I stay awake, smiling back at framed faces on my bookshelf. No counting sheep in the still of late night peace, for a quiet house sleeps and children, tired from busy day of play, are wrapped in fleece dreaming of yesterday's Christmas. Inspired by the warmth of memories and family, I write this poem in the moment with my little pup resting at my feet, husband snoring deep. Only light coming from my small lamp and the stars. A cup of hot tea on the nightstand is my only friend when I write in the hush of the day's dreamy end. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 12/26/14 *Modern Sonnet

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Date: 3/7/2015 9:11:00 AM
Awesome...:-) :-) :-) really enjoyed...congratulations
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Date: 2/19/2015 6:18:00 PM
I love the setting you have set of a peaceful serene moment alone. 7 Congratulations on your winning poem. Blessings eve
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Date: 2/19/2015 6:08:00 PM
Rhonda, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**
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Date: 2/19/2015 10:01:00 AM
so beautiful and dreamy Rhonda - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:38:00 AM
Rhonda, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "This Very Moment" if you'd like. Wishing you a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Date: 1/5/2015 10:40:00 PM
Rhonda, wonderful write, Christmas past and rest, your own quite time 7
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Date: 12/31/2014 8:35:00 PM
Hello my friend Rhonda,happy new year to you and all that are yours...huggs
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Date: 12/31/2014 5:57:00 AM
Dear Rhonda: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.
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Date: 12/31/2014 12:01:00 AM
This is lovely Rhonda. Have a wonderful New year!
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Date: 12/30/2014 6:45:00 AM
Rhonda this is very good, the enjambment lends to the flow so well, I have a challenge for you I'm SURE you are up to-add 4 more lines and you will have a modern sonnet! If you'd like to read what I've been writing from my trip email me hon & I will send them to you there aleezadelta@aol.com. [I'd love your input] Happy New Year Light & Love
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Date: 12/30/2014 11:11:00 PM
Now how could I say no to you? I'll add the 4 lines, but I probably won't have time to write until Thursday night or Friday...I'm on my way to email you...I'd love to read what you're writing from your trip.
Date: 12/30/2014 3:22:00 AM
- The year 2014 did not have many hours left .... The bells will ring in a new year 2015! - I wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful New Year! - We will meet again with smiles and tears in the new year - Bless you my dear friend, Rhonda! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/30/2014 2:42:00 AM
so beautifully dreamy Rhonda love it hugs 7
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Date: 12/29/2014 2:38:00 AM
What this poem really represents is an honest capture of you living a precious moment and nothing compares. Your little pup at your feet, your children asleep with the thrill of Christmas still in their feel. A beautiful touching piece.
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Date: 12/28/2014 10:03:00 AM
love the peaceful picture this sweet write conjures up. Thanks very much, Rhonda - loved the contest
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Date: 12/27/2014 3:18:00 PM
Sounds lovely!
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Date: 12/27/2014 11:02:00 AM
Thank-you for sharing this quiet intimate moment -- to hear the silence of the day, I didn't want it to end . . . 7
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Date: 12/27/2014 10:26:00 AM
Hi Rhonda, a very soothing and peaceful feeling in your lovely poem as you express your late night moment after Christmas Day. GL in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/27/2014 6:25:00 AM
A perfect moment in time. Lovely. BG
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:57:00 AM
I like this poem of yours, Rhonda. It has such a warm, snug, secure feeling of complete contentedness to it...just lovely!! :) john.
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